I DONT KNOW!

 

 

 

 

 

 

So as Emma had sat down waiting for peter to get there, she heard sudden death piercing noises as if someone was scratching there finger nails down the side of the chalk board, and Emma couldn't stand that noise so as she had tried to find what in the world or who in the world was making such retrid noises. So as Emma had got up to see what was going on she had entered the living room and then when she had got there the noise instantly had stopped. So then she had got curious but just as she had went to enter the kitchen, she had heard a car door slam. So she had rushed to the foyer to see who was there, and it was only peter arriving in his new Mercadies bins that he had been bragging about in school. As peter had came in they were was dead silence. The only thing that you could hear was the echoing of there breathing, and gasping around in the air. So as Emma and peter had went to go back out inside to go into the woods to see if they could find out where in the world the two other goof balls had went. So as peter had went to enter the woods a big clog of wind came and a gasp of a cold air had hit Emma right in the face as she had went to enter. Emma had new instantly it was the ghost so she had sat down on the ground and started to cry what do you want from me leave me alone i don't know what you want find someone else to bother i just want to be left alone and to have my friends back is that to much to ask for. Apparently it was because right after she had said that the ghost got a little bit on the cranky side. He had attacked Emma he had grabbed her and threw her into the air and with a giant fore she had landed on the ground with a huge thud. And peter was so much in shock he was speechless he didn't know what to do all he remembered seeing was Emma being thrown up in the air by nothing well that's what he had saw was nothing. As Emma had landed on the ground peter rushed over in dis-belief that that had ever happened.

 

 

“oh my god what just happened?” asked peter.

“ i don't know what had happened all i know is that my freakin arm is killing me.' said Emma.

 

 

So as Peter had piked up Emma and brought her into the house he had laid her down on the table. And had put a pillow under neath per arm even though it was the most retrid smelling thing you have have smelled in your hole life.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

So as Peter had picked up Emma and brought her into the house he had laid her down on the table. And had put a pillow under neath per arm, as peter ahd comforted emma she ahd started to wake up some more and not im some comma that hse had been in from such a shocking and powerful drop so as she had finally recovered so that she could understand what had happened, she had forgot all about the fact that Dylan and Gavin were still out in the woods. So as peter was so shocked all he had wanted to do was go home and pass out for all he had cared. So as he and emma had went home forgetting all about Dylan and Gavin, But day two at the haunted house was just around the corner. So that next morning emma was still a little bit shokin up so when she had finally decided to get out of bed and get dressed and eat breakfast she was out of the house before 8:00 so she had had time to make it to the haunted house on t ime and not be late like she always was. So when emma and her mom got into the car it had all hit emma like a fly getting splatted by a fly swatter she had forgot all about Dylan and gavin at the haunted house last night. Then as soon as she ahd thought about it a very sharp pain had struck her right arm it felt as if someone had twisted it around five million times the bent it up-wards. Then out of no ware she screamed because the pain was so bad she couldn’t help but not scream. Her mom had slammed on the brakes, causing everything in the car to go forward in cluding her moms coffee.

 

“Emma whats wrong with t=you are you ok?” asked emmas mom.

“ Mom no im not ok I fell on the floor last night, and I hurt my arm” said emma.

“well what in the world were you doing on the floor?” asked h=emmas mom once again.

“hmm lets think about this I was practicing head satnds what do you think I was doing? I triped down the stairs last night on my way to go get something to drink.” Said emma.

 

Emma couldn’t of had told her mom the truth, with what really happened to her arm she would of went buzzerck and never of had let me go back to he haunted house again. And then she would never be able to find Gavin and Dylan. So as emmas mom had pulled into the long and dusty road. And when they got half way there to the house they saw it and emma jumped out of the car.

 

“mom ill see you tonight don’t forget to pick me up kay love you bye” yelled emma.

 

As emma had sprinted to the house emmas mom was kinda concerned so she ahd kept driving towards the house to se what was wrong with emma to see if there was a problem or not. So as emmas mom had arrived at the house the windows ahd had half of them bparded and half of them not. She had peered down at he door to see a little old lady that had a long dull brown skirt and a pink blowse with brown sequences on it. And she had the most hudioud clogs or crocks or what ever you wanna call them but emmas mom did not like them at all. As emmas mom had got out of the car she had heard a snatch crack, she hd looked down to see a single braclet that had a single pink unicorn on it. And she had remembered emmas braclet so she had adimatiacly had thought that emma had just dropped it when she was in such a hurry for no reason. Then emmas mom had got very suspicious. So as she had started to walk closer and closer to the house Ms. Sterns had wondered who it was.

 

“uhm, can I help you” ask ms.Sterns.

“actually you probably could I was wondering where emma had wnet do oyu know where I can find her hse kinda just jumped out of the car and didn’t say anything she was just acious I geuss to get here and help out.” Said Emma’s mom.

“Well I highly dought that emma was coming here to help, she was probably just going out back into the woods to see if dyaln or peter were her” said Ms. Sterns.

“Are you sure because hse had gone on a dead run and she just said to pick her up this afternoon. Do you even know what these kids do during the day or do oyu juts sit there demanding things for them to do” yelled Emmas mom.

“Well I can asure you that these kids are always watched and are always in control.”said Ms.Sterns.

“Well obviously not, and I think its time for a new summer school teacher because you are the roodest of all of Emmas teachers I have ever ment.”Said Emma’s mom.

 

So as Emma’s mom had turned around and went back into her car and she had drove off making a huge smoke cloud in the distant behind her.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

october 22, 07 

 

the book that i read and thought that was most interesting to me was Many Stones and the book was about a little girl named stacy and her sisiter laura had died and after she had died stacy didnt make such good choices and causeing her to be very ill and noshis. But after she had relized what she was doing was killing her she had got the help that sheneeded. Making the eneding a verry happy giggly type of story and she was able to become better.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

october 16, 07

 

for my begining scene i wanted  to have 5 kids enter one of the newest haunted house that no one is able to leave unless they are able to finish the chalenges. Then one of the kids gets to scared so they decide to go back to the entrence there for leading them to serious injuries and perhaps maybe even death! =O But on there way back to the enterance they go through many opsticles,and difficult challenges. But the other kids are to finish what they have started or they can just end up like the other kid who decides to go back to the begining. 

 

 

(lets just say thta this story is going to be veryyyyyyyyy interesting =] )

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 october 15, 07

 

I would like my reader to remember how interesting, excitng, and how much of a thriller it was.I want them to feel like they are ev erryyyyyyyyyy scared and want to cry well maybe not cry beacouse thats kinda dramatic but yea anywase. i want them to be affected as in they were veryy scareddddddd! 

 

                                                               =]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 October 11, 07

 

 

This morning i had got wokken up by a verry odd scene, my dog woke me up but it wasnet just and normal wake up call she kinda liked tlaked to me which obviously got me right of bead. After i had came out of schock that my dog was tlaking... i asked her what do you hate about your life and she ahd tolled me that she hatesa it when we feed her the crudy kind of dog food... course kibbles and bits. She then siad to me that she would prefer can food then baged. But then she was all liek enough with the negative liets go on about the positive things in my life, " I love it when i get lots of chew toys instead of chewing on moms soafa and getting in lots of trouble". " but overal i think i would be having the best dog years of my life so far and i hope that i will get everyhting that i have told you to get me and make sure i do or else!" So after my dog had odamatically stopped tlkaing to me i was kinda like WOW!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

october, 10 07

Magna Carta ll

 

1.slow

2.boring

3. gory

4.fantasy

5.more facts then the actual story

6.non-fiction

7.i hate ANY BIG BOOK!

8.basically uhmmm................................................................................ storys that have crudy ending to it

9.storys that have like people that are boring

10.no humor

11.books with no pictures

11.books withm ore then 250 pages

12.books with grose bugs

13 no creativity to it

14.with a lot of talking

15.planet books

 

october,9 07

 

  Scene 1

 

    On a bright and sunny saturday morning i  would usually wake up and sit down for a nice morning breakfast with my dad but this morning wasent like usaul mornings this moring i had to go to SUMMER SCHOOL! Dun!, dun!, dun!. not saying that im a bad kid or anything just that purhapse I might forget to do me home work once in a while not a biggy. Well to me it isint beacouse what else would i rather do then go to summer school, well I have my reasons. But for now its off to summer school,so i grab a slim fast bar and i'm off like the wind.

 

 

 

    Scene 2

 

     Finally im home! i shouted, after wards i had got off my bike put it in the garage went in side but while i was getting somehting to eat i happened to come upon a verry interesting object. Well ithink it was a rat or a catr or even maybe a mat well maybe not a mat im over acsaderating.

 

 

 

 

october,9th 07

 

 

Once upon a time an elephant and a pirate set sail on a fire truck.

 

While on there journey they came upon a very molded pickle.

 

Then after they had wiped the pickle off with a Kleenex they had eaten it.